Exploratory Essay:  Sample Assignment Sequence

Initiating an Inquiry into Technology

 

Goal for unit:

To identify a technology that presents an intriguing question, one that students can investigate in a variety of ways for the entire semester. The essay will serve to pose their question, through personal observations and stories and through consideration of one of the essays.  Read two of the following Presence of Others essays on science and technology, most likely Rifkin, Oppenheimer, J. Q. Wilson, Samuelson.

 
The focus of this entire unit is to get students to raise questions instead of jumping to answers, to become invested in an inquiry into technology that will last a semester--and not get old.  The primary evidence will come from their own experiences and observations, but students will be expected to consider part of one essay as well.
 
 
 


Day 1.

Introduction to the unit.  Students can brainstorm/list topics/thoughts about technology and do some focused freewriting, all with the purpose of finding a topic of interest. This could also alter the choice of essays assigned from Presence.  Students can share and respond to ideas in Blackboard.  As a way of introducing these essays, students could be introduced to the art of skimming for a purpose: to find a topic of inquiry for the semester.  Homework:  Read essay in technology unit (probably Wilson).  Respond by making a double-entry journal response in Blackboard.  Also in Blackboard, write a brief nonfiction story or detailed observation that in some way seems important as you think about the technology they've tentatively chose.
 

   

 

Students are introduced to some processes of generating language:  listing, freewriting, double-entry journaling.

 
 

Day 2.

Students practice reading their and others' writing with the purpose of discovering an engaging question about technology.  First, in groups of three, students reflect on the possible meaning of each of their stories in Blackboard.  Then the groups share their discoveries with the class, always moving in the direction of finding questions.  This process will probably need to be modeled by the instructor.  Discuss Wilson essay first to capture the general argument and evidence, then consider the questions it explicitly or implicitly raises.  Homework:  Students read another essay in the technology unit, this time of their choice and respond (1) by summarizing in 100 words or less and (2) using double-entry journal technique in Blackboard, especially using it to raise questions. 
 

   

The key to this day is to transform experience into wondering, not answers.  Ultimately, this entire essay may become the introduction to the final essay of the term

 
 

Day 3. 

Work on communicating the essence of an essay to someone who hasn't read it.  This involves figuring out what is critical to include and articulating the summary in a concise, even elegant way.  In new groups of three, in Blackboard, students share their homework assignments and add to each other's questions.  Discussion regarding how they're coming along with finding a question they'll willingly pursue for the semester.  Homework:  Write another nonfiction story or detailed observation that makes your technology question more compelling or that alters it some.
 

   

Day 3's focus is two-fold:  to learn to summarize effectively for an audience unfamiliar with what they've read, and to read a published essay on their topic for a specific purpose:  discovering or refining their question.

 

Day 4.

Instructor models how students can read the new story in relation to the original story as a way of complicating the question being asked, or complicating the way the question is being asked.  Then students work in pairs or groups of three.  Afterwards, students can do some focused freewriting to arrive at their best version of a question and to consider which pieces that they've written so far might go in their essay and in what order. Homework:  Write first draft of exploratory essay, including Works Cited page and metatext.  See essay prompt.

 

 
 
This assignment is tricky because they have to find a story that does not simply provide evidence for their way of thinking about technology but raises a question.  In other words, they need to search their experience for a perspective that challenges or complicates their initial perspective.
 

Day 5.

Instruction based upon common problems noticed in first drafts (possible through pre-class preview of drafts by instructor).  Instruction on peer review, along with questions for peer review, to precede peer review work via Blackboard and in person.  Homework:  Write second draft of essay, including new metatext.

 
 
It's possible to quickly look through Blackboard before class to get a sense of what students will need to work on.  (See suggestions for using computers in the classroom.)
 
 


Day 6. 

Editing work on second draft, including in-class exercises based on sentences copy and pasted by instructor from drafts in Blackboard.